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Awakening

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Some practice stuff. I like her original design sketch better, but oh well ♥ I don't know if it needs a filter since she's not naked sooo...


This is Dust. She's this demon type thing that's been a sleep for a long long time and stuff.


paint tool sai, photoshop cs2. cgtextures.com
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1110x1700px 1.8 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Konett
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First of all I want to say that this piece is absolutely lovely to look at!

I love the way you shaded her hair and body even though I myself are extremely picky with colours in pictures. Everything on her look so soft and comfortable. It´s very natural even if it is anime style.

The only thing that bugs me though is the golden "fence/window" thing in the back. It almost only looks like a pasted brush from Photoshop and doesn´t quite fit in with it´s sharpness and no additional details except the lightning.

I will now assume that it is a window so I hope I´m not wrong but the light from it almost feel "TOO" strong if you looks at the gentle shine in her hair and sheet.

I suggest you should have made the Golden window more detailed with more personal touch on it for that final look or made it even blurrier though to the strong light.

Some more contrast in the picture would be nice but other than that this picture is extremely professional and I adore it!

And for a last suggestion I think your art deserved to be noticed more, you should really start to submit to more clubs!
I would love too see your work in there!
And I know you would qualify for the big quality groups! *A*

Keep up the beautiful work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>