First of all I want to say that this piece is absolutely lovely to look at!
I love the way you shaded her hair and body even though I myself are extremely picky with colours in pictures. Everything on her look so soft and comfortable. It´s very natural even if it is anime style.
The only thing that bugs me though is the golden "fence/window" thing in the back. It almost only looks like a pasted brush from Photoshop and doesn´t quite fit in with it´s sharpness and no additional details except the lightning.
I will now assume that it is a window so I hope I´m not wrong but the light from it almost feel "TOO" strong if you looks at the gentle shine in her hair and sheet.
I suggest you should have made the Golden window more detailed with more personal touch on it for that final look or made it even blurrier though to the strong light.
Some more contrast in the picture would be nice but other than that this picture is extremely professional and I adore it!
And for a last suggestion I think your art deserved to be noticed more, you should really start to submit to more clubs! I would love too see your work in there! And I know you would qualify for the big quality groups! *A*
Wow, what can I say? you make wonderful art. The girl's lapis eyes are so sweet. She's lovely, just like this piece. I love your work of colours and tones, the outfit design is enjoyable, I like the added touch of wings. The art style all in all is great you have a lot of talent and I look forward to more art from you. I really enjoy all of your art. You have a unique and reformed style, I love the soft shading technique.
LOVE. <3
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL I love this. I ran out of thoughts..... Lol Wat do? Oh. Finished.
I love the way you shaded her hair and body even though I myself are extremely picky with colours in pictures. Everything on her look so soft and comfortable. It´s very natural even if it is anime style.
The only thing that bugs me though is the golden "fence/window" thing in the back. It almost only looks like a pasted brush from Photoshop and doesn´t quite fit in with it´s sharpness and no additional details except the lightning.
I will now assume that it is a window so I hope I´m not wrong but the light from it almost feel "TOO" strong if you looks at the gentle shine in her hair and sheet.
I suggest you should have made the Golden window more detailed with more personal touch on it for that final look or made it even blurrier though to the strong light.
Some more contrast in the picture would be nice but other than that this picture is extremely professional and I adore it!
And for a last suggestion I think your art deserved to be noticed more, you should really start to submit to more clubs!
I would love too see your work in there!
And I know you would qualify for the big quality groups! *A*
Keep up the beautiful work
LOVE. <3
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL I love this. I ran out of thoughts..... Lol Wat do? Oh. Finished.
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